re:Virals 546
Uma Padmanabhan - loosening the strings: commentaries on " puppet theater/someone calls me by/my childhood nickname" by Cezar Ciobica
re:Virals is an interactive feature which offers commentary on selected haiku each week. The supplier of the best commentary each week gets to choose the next week’s poem. An updated version of Virals, an early interactive feature of THF. co-hosts: Shawn Blair, Melissa Dennison, Susan Yavaniski, and Keith Evetts (managing editor).
Uma Padmanabhan - loosening the strings: commentaries on " puppet theater/someone calls me by/my childhood nickname" by Cezar Ciobica
Jonathan Epstein — listen to the grace notes: comments on "memorial bench. . . / she shares her chit-chat / with the pigeons" by Annie Wilson
David Cox—the genie is out of the bottle:enlightenment! Commentaries on "speechless this evening I'm a lamp" by Ella Aboutboul
Yibo Xu—the reader's own awareness: commentaries on "kuma in a coma in a cave" by Roberta Beach Jacobson
Orense Nicod—poetry as witness: commentaries on "TWIN CITIES / NO(T)ICE" by Petra Schmidt
Supplementary essay by Orense Nicod based on this week's verse: "Show me the sutra / In which the Buddha praises / The colors of beer." by Barry Foy
Dan Campbell—wisdom without ceremony, with a smile: commentaries on "Show me the sutra / In which the Buddha praises / The colors of beer." by Barry Foy
Ashoka Weerakkody —haunting us in cyberspace: commentaries on "the box to check / that I'm not a robot— / winter rain by Cherie Hunter Day
Orense Nicod—an embodied sense of duration: commentaries on "still attached / to the old days / a watch on a chain" by Ernest Wit
Sean Murphy—listening to the whales: commentaries on "whale songs . . . / when did we stop / talking" by Bud Cole
Orense Nicod—not knowing the answers: commentaries on "my wife left me / does this heavy rain at dusk / fall where she is" by Jerry Gill
Richard Straw—isn’t a poem itself a song? Commentaries on "Grasshoppers… / I can’t run or jump / anymore" by Satoru Kanematsu
Urszula Marciniak —learning a new language: commentaries on "distant stars— / the refugee mother rewrites / her lullaby by Hifsa Ashraf
Sudha Devi Nayak—an evocative medley: commentaries on "low slung sky / the rain hanging / by a hundred prayers" by Anju Kishore
Shalini Pattabiraman and language games: commentaries on "her child answers / in the nanny's tongue / end of summer" by Roland Packer
Ashoka Weerakkody—that unfulfilled desire: commentaries on "sailboats / or just seagulls / far away" by Mirela Brailean
Urzula Marciniak—to understand the world by giving names: commentaries on "first petrichor after learning the word petrichor" by Saumya Bansal
Sean Murphy—the tone of the piece: commentaries on "a bit of Mozart / among beeps and buzzes / of the MRI" by Tim Dwyer
Dan Campbell -- a garland of blooms commentaries on: prom queent/the short reign/of primrose